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Green-eyed lady, ocean lady

Mister Doe sent this one to me, and it’s one of the better examples of “in certain circumstances”: the narrator is totally unable to see anyone with green eyes. Unfortunately, this included his mother, who died when he was ten.

It’s a little rough around the edges, but it gets the tone and the dynamics right.

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